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Cold Winter Dreams

It has been already four days that it does not stop raining. The sky is grey and looks as if it is the end of the world.
Yellow lightnings flash in the sky and lick the roofs of the houses as a huge fiery snakes and the streets hist flooded in water under the tires of cars.
I try looking out of the window while my breadth blurres the glass all covered with falling rain drops .
A strange feeling of sadness clutches the chest and exorts with a sigh of disquiet.
Do you know that feeling?
It comes with the dusk jacketed with fog crocheting it`s nest in the heart.
It stays there and grows with the cold until the morning light washes the town and reflections of Sun awaken the hope driving out what`s left from the night.
I can`t wait for the morning.
Can`t wait to see the end of that cold winter dream.

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AsADrivenLeaf wrote on January 13, 2015, 12:44 PM

I enjoy narratives such as this writing. A good prompt for a novel, I suppose? Good be on your way to this day to you and family.

maxeen wrote on January 13, 2015, 12:48 PM

Very romantic writing there Romeo,I enjoyed..

Romeo wrote on January 13, 2015, 1:44 PM

Thank you for these kind words. I do not write novels. Actually I am not writer. It is still very difficult for me to write in English because my vocabulary in this language is yet too small.

Romeo wrote on January 13, 2015, 1:47 PM

Thank you ! I really feel well knowing that someone enjoyed reading it. There will be more. Stay tuned:)

Romeo wrote on January 13, 2015, 1:51 PM

Actually I write a lot but am not novelist.

maxeen wrote on January 13, 2015, 3:15 PM

Pleased you liked my comment ,I wish there was a poetry section also .

Romeo wrote on January 13, 2015, 4:00 PM

Yes that is a great proposal, perhaps it should be addressed to the admins. I am sure they would love to receive new and good ideas like your.

maxeen wrote on January 13, 2015, 4:03 PM

I have heard a few people suggest it.

Romeo wrote on January 13, 2015, 6:36 PM

Do you write poetry? I used to do, but in English I find it more difficult.

maxeen wrote on January 13, 2015, 6:46 PM

I do have a go sometimes,i was on Bubblews where I used to do more ,were you on there ? I think it would be interesting to read it in a different way, One of the best writers I knew was Vietnamese .

Romeo wrote on January 13, 2015, 8:39 PM

I never had a chance to read Vietnamese authors. If I have I'd be glad to do it. I read many of the foreign authors in my own language translated from original.