We all win.
Does a lot of
I love seeing her smiling face.
I could stare at it all night long.
I love to hear her sing to be
That sweet, melodic song.
You're brightness shines
Throughout the land.
Your appearance is gentle.
Your walk so refined.
You give me pleasure
And peace of mind.
I can't say enough
Of your smiling face.
I just want a hint
Of your glorious taste.
There will never be
A reason to depart.
You have won my heart.
trufflehunter wrote on January 9, 2015, 1:39 AM
Truly a smile is more beautiful than the best outfit one can wear. Thumbs up!
zaib009 wrote on January 9, 2015, 7:39 AM
a true smile can win a heart no doubt about that and you make me smile :)
soupdragon wrote on January 9, 2015, 4:34 PM
A smile that isn't faked is a wonderful, beautiful thing to see
Romeo wrote on January 11, 2015, 1:50 PM
You wrote it greatly. I liked this as I liked your other poem. It is pleasure to read it.